Pensil on Bienfang 18×24
The reflection drawing is based on an enclosed space with structured lines to create a sense of balance. Many of the lines stay within the center of the canvas creating a claustrophobic feeling with some melodic motion. The weight of the lines feel heavy in the imagined lines within the space symbolizing melody.
Some points for improvement are to include more variation in line weight to increase the form of the symbols, increase contrast to improve visibility from a distance, and moving lines away from the portrait to use more of the space.